http://kmonasterial.weebly.com/
Kimberly’s weebly profile speaks about herself in detail. She describes herself in relation to her craft, family, friends, and aspirations. Also, with the theme and design that she has chosen, it shows a bit of her personality that she is girly. The website provides its readers a glimpse of her outlook in life, which is optimism. She also gave enough mediums on how to contact her through her “Contact Me” page.
What’s lacking in Kimberly’s weebly profile is the basic details like birth date, etc. that the readers will be looking for. What she could have done is to indicate her formal profile and at the same time her interests, and the like. to showcase a more dimensional side of herself. Another thing is that the pages in her website are too wordy and that may cause the readers to lose interest plus the color scheme is too blunt. Lastly, the website is leaning more towards the blog side rather than appealing as a formal website with the way it is designed and the words chosen by the creator.
http://nicolemcnp.weebly.com/
Home page
Nicole’s weebly profile speaks a lot about herself in terms of academics, extra curricular activities, and social life. She really made her website personal. She has presented herself in a way that shows all aspects of her life. She has provided the readers a glimpse of how she is in every aspect. What’s nice about her weebly profile is that it has the balance of a blog and a formal profile. It is like an online resume with the added benefit of her social life. What’s nice about her website is that she provided an “updates” tab wherein her activities will be shown. This isn’t a common thing to see or do because it’s like you’re incorporating your twitter or Facebook account, with all your updates, into your profile. Also, she provided a “Links” tab that shows websites that are similar to hers to give an avenue for users like her to be linked to her and known by the public.
The first thing i noticed that is lacking in her website is her last name. She only provided her first name in which the readers will ask for her last name. Another thing is the theme that she used. Although the color might speak of her strong personality, the colors that she has chosen are too loud.
