DO THE TWIST: BRAIDING (3 STYLES)
Trixie created a tutorial video for braiding hair. The background music she used is catchy and actually very nice to listen to. It added up to the mood that the video blogger was trying to present. One more thing is that she really looked like she was enjoying what she was doing which made me more engrossed to the tutorial. The video, overall, was informative and helpful by showing new ways on how to style your braids but some changes can be done in order to make it better.
I noticed that when Trixie was braiding her hair, the camera was not focus on the act of braiding hence, the viewers cannot see how the braid was actually done. It looked like she was just watching herself braid her hair in front of a mirror. It could have been more effective if she actually shown the audience up close how the braiding was done.
SEMI DONUT BUN TUTORIAL
Rose Lyn created a tutorial for another hairstyle which is the semi donut bun. It was nice that she gave a short description of her video and said that she actually uses that kind of hairstyle often which shows that she knows what she’s doing.
I prefer the method that she has done in showing how to actually do the semi donut bun. Her hair was facing the camera therefore giving the viewers a clearer view on how it is done. On the other hand, she could have moved closer to the camera to give the viewers an even more clear view of the process which could have made the video a lot more effective. Also, what Rose Lyn could have done was to cut clips of the actual semi donut bun process and repeat it again towards the end of the video to further instill on the audience on how it is done.
